Here is my entry for Susan Leonard Hill’6th Annual Halloweensie Story Contest. Scroll down to see contest details below.
Spider’s Halloween Hunt
By Kristen Olsen
In the light of the moon
hovered a small spider
watching trick or treaters
from her hot air balloon.
She spun white sticky webs
from gateposts to doorposts
to trap tasty treats like
sour bats and ghost heads.
“I always catch the most,”
small spider liked to sing
as she floated above
sipping cider with toast.
Along came a monsoon.
Cold wind halloweensied.
The balloon lost control
and crashed near a lagoon.
With candy apple eyes
a toad croaked to spider
“It’s my birthday today,
thank you for my surprise.”
The Contest: write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (title not included in the 100 words), using the words spider, ghost, and moon. Your story can be scary, funny or anything in between, poetry or prose, but it will only count for the contest if it includes those 3 words and is 100 words (you can go under, but not over!) Get it? Halloweensie – because it’s not very long and it’s for little people (And yes, I know 100 words is short but that’s part of the fun and the challenge! We got nearly 150 fantastic entries last year so I know you can do it!) Also, you may use the words in any form – e.g. moon, moons, mooned, spidery, ghostly, whathaveyou No illustration notes please!
Very cute! Love the ending! Also, the rhyming pattern is so fun. Happy Halloween!
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Thank you so much Three Show Saturday. I appreciate your support! Happy writing!
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Thanks for your support!
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I love that less common rhyme scheme you used! And it’s fun to picture a spider drifting around in a hot air balloon. Fun story!
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Thanks for your kind comments Laura.
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I like how you used “halloweensied” as a verb! Fun story!
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Thanks for your support Gabi!
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Nice language and images, Kristen! Love your use of halloweensied! And the toad’s candy apple eyes! I’m a little worried about how things might have turned out for spider though… 🙂 Thanks so much for joining in the Halloweensie fun!
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Oh, this was lots of fun…loved your lyrical language…and the surprise at the end was great! Well, not so great for spider, I guess.;)
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Thank you Vivian!
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